As you walk in the rain, with your head bent to the ground,
the cold wind lashes you, you can barely stand steady;
the chill rain is a full frontal attack, your eyes cannot see;
and the thunder sounds like the reflection of an earthquake.
The strikes of lightning make your head jerk up,
and you stop walking, and stand, and breathe underwater;
the familiar street changes around you, as you see the water hit your eyes,
and in a moment of clarity, you see the stars glowing straight through the rain;
your world falls away, and you are alone,
alone on the slope of a mountain beside the sea;
the wind lashes the waves, and the water pounds against the cliffs,
you tremble at how fierce your joy can be;
and your senses scream to you to run with the wind,
to take to the sea and the wind with a running jump off the cliff,
a free fall that will never end, a whirlpool of the elements that embrace you.
If you ever had a soul, the stars call to it now,
and it wakens, and yearns, and strains to the maelstrom sky;
it tries to soar to the vast nothingness beyond the storm,
but you are afraid, and your soul won't fly away without you.
You reach up on your toes, and you stand like a dancer in the rain;
the wind tears your breath away, and your heart is at peace at last.
The rain dies, and the wind slows, and the stars' fury fades,
you are left drained by the spirit of the storm.
You return to the empty street with the single flickering light,
as you start walking again, your hands feel empty;
you look down and there is a heart sized hole in your chest,
and as your joy fades away and then comes back stronger,
you know your heart lies bleeding on a cliff beside the sea,
and when the blood of your heart runs with the rain into the storm,
the storm reaches the stars, and then your blood colours the sky.
Treta Yuga was switched places with Dwapar
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I bow to thee the god of times
for you know all the tales
of this species called mankind
and how it wins, how it fails
So this happened, as I was told,
in ...
4 years ago
12 comments:
that is called writing from the heart..you can simply visualise each scene with each word and sentence..damn good i have not read something this good for sometime now...funnily enough i find good things to read only in ur blog...i thoroughly enjoyed myself babe...
I'll describe my sight of the evening in one word - rainsmoke.
Rising off the parapet of the opposite house, the yellow light shining behind... divine.
@suki di- which funnily enough is the name of my blog.......fate or coincidence? or perhaps just u being nice?
Yeah well... I was thinking of smoke and rain and was going to describe it and then the name of your blog just clicked and lightbulb moment happened.
Or, in Shoili's current hostel lingo, "lightbulb was coming".
WOW!!! was a treat!!!
As in they say
"Der aayad; durust aayad"
I guess thats Arabic
@nuktaa - thanks so much........what DOES that mean, though?
hey! i was gonna say that... it was raining and winding. wetness happened and black bra beneath white tee was disastrous
well it rougly translates... "a late Post but a wondeful one"
@nuktaa - awww thanks! :-)
:-)
beautiful. fiercely poetic.
thank you!! i was imagining special effects from the lord of the rings and 300 skyscapes the whole time i was writing this......:-)
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